ext_225240 ([identity profile] swythyv.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mary_j_59 2007-07-13 03:23 am (UTC)

I liked her extracting the promise that he pass it on, thus binding him to have a future and not just to take an action. :D You did such fine job of telegraphing both their strengths in their adversity - and that for both of them seeing to strength came before comforting or nurturing. Well done!


Post a comment in response:

This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting