The essay is fine either way, really. And I liked that you included a Christian perspective on the series. In her latest interview, JKR came out and said that she wrote Harry Potter as a Christian story, and that just pains me. It's like she included the Christian imagery, but left the pesky morality behind. So, it's really nice to hear that other people aren't happy with the ultimate morality of the series. I've friended you, if that's OK?