Go right ahead - I have just friended you. And I love the drabble! I do need some help with the latin; this is how I have translated it: (more than 20 years from Latin class, and without the aid of a dictionary, so I'm sure I've got many mistakes -)

Hail, Sanguini. Did you ---?-- Julius Caesar?

Truly. I loved him. His blood was delicious.

So - how far off am I? Corrections from me you will not get; your Latin is far better than mine!