Thank you, Anne! I am so glad you like this one, too, since I'm quite proud of it. (Of course, it's Michael, overprotective though he also is, who talks Jane into letting Chris have this present). About the other story - thanks to your comments and my younger sister's, I've revised it slightly and may be sending you the revision tonight. I think it's improved, but I'm thrilled that all three of you liked the original version. Now I just have to think of a place to send it -
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Date: 2008-06-11 09:07 pm (UTC)