Thanks! BTW, I'm not sure I'll EVER be done "weeding" this story. I have a (really solid; I'm happy with it) August version that supplants the last one I sent you. In this case, the changes are relatively minor - I was trying to trim, clean up the language, and check for consistency. Would you like me to forward you this version, if you haven't already gotten to the earlier draft?

I hope you've been enjoying your summer, in any case. It's going very quickly!