http://deirdrej.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] deirdrej.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mary_j_59 2012-03-30 04:10 pm (UTC)

Ha! I have it! What if you end the last sentence like this:

...and his armor shining brighter than her newly polished floor, its perfection now marred slightly by the roast she had just dropped in her amazement.

Absurdity. It's a talent of mine. :-D

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