Thanks for your tuppence worth! I think it would probably be ideal to call it some alien thing and then explain later that it's a 3-d video camera, but my technique doesn't extend to figuring out how to do this smoothly and easily. So holocam it is, for now. I may put up my "new" first page so people can see how it flows now (and, hopefully, get interested in the book, if I manage to get it published!)Do you think that would be a good idea?

And, btw, would you like me to shoot you an epub file of the latest version?