mary_j_59

As a reader, I can definitely see where you're coming from, Sylvanawood! But RJ, above, told me that a query isn't exactly like the jacket blurb, in that you don't want to spoil your readers, but shouldn't worry about spoiling the agent. They need to hear the whole story. As far as that goes, the main part of the story is the kidnapping, what leads up to it, and what follows from it. But there are two climaxes, as it were, and RJ thought I should hint at the second - thus the last paragraph.