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Hi, everyone! I am not sure how many of you will be up for this, but I just found out about a great contest on Twitter. YATopia is hosting a pitch contest. They explain that, though Ammi-Joan Paquette is currently closed to submissions, she will look at two-sentence pitches for this contest. You can find the rules and enter here:http://yatopia.blogspot.com/2011/03/agent-pitch-contest.html#comments

Good luck, everyone! (Of course, I am entering myself> :))

Hi, everyone. Deirdrej and I have been working some more on the query - before sending it to more agents, I want to be sure it's as strong as it possibly can be. Here it is - would be glad to get some opinions. (We are both a bit sad to lose Niki, who is such a big part of the story - but you don't have to tell the whole story in the query, do you?)

Note: I rewrote this, after all. So I have pasted the new query below this one. I think it may be there!

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Here's another attempt at the query. R.J. and Deirdre, thanks so much for your help! I think this is definitely a lot better than my first try, but I'm not sure it's there yet. More under the cut- ( Read more... )