Right - I'll take out his name, then. That's a small loss - I was sorry to lose Niki, who is one of my viewpoint characters, but I'd already lost Skel, who's another. What I'm left with does capture the heart of the story - it would take me far too long to explain the other kids and their roles.
But I prefer "Terrans" to "aliens". Getting mixed feedback on that one.
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Date: 2011-03-15 08:15 pm (UTC)But I prefer "Terrans" to "aliens". Getting mixed feedback on that one.