"A sword against the gods" is cool! I like it! "To Fight with Heaven" is a little awkward - it's Kiril speaking English and translating on the fly - but it's a direct quote, which is why I kept that phrasing. But I think yours is a little better. I also thought of "Battling the gods". The only thing that bothers me about these titles is that they seem so high fantasy. And that's one thing my book definitely is not. Still - good suggestion.
Maybe the 'with/against' thing is a dialect question? To me, when you fight with someone, they are your opponent, not your ally!
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Re: Titles
Date: 2014-03-10 11:05 pm (UTC)Maybe the 'with/against' thing is a dialect question? To me, when you fight with someone, they are your opponent, not your ally!