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mary_j_59A death eater moment analyzed (or, Snape as Darcy, after all??)
Here is my first essay about the Potterverse. Is Snape really as cruel as he seems to be in a key scene of HBP?
In chapter eight of Half-Blood Prince - “Snape Victorious” - we witness one of what I’ve been calling Snape’s unadulterated death eater moments. These are very brief, but horrifying, moments of gratuitous cruelty to characters who are in distress, and there are only three that I can think of in the entire series: the attempt to poison Neville Longbottom’s toad during a potions class; the nasty remark about Hermione’s teeth, and the comment Snape makes about Tonks’s Patronus form. There is no excuse at all for the attacks on the two children (and Trevor the toad), but a few essays I read recently encouraged me to look again at the Patronus scene and question what Snape was really doing in this conversation.
Before citing the text, I would like to clarify exactly what a Patronus signifies in the Harry Potter books. A Patronus is a sort of spirit guardian, a form of white magic based on happy memories. It can protect against certain enemies, particularly the dementors, who suck all happiness from their victims, and Dumbledore has also taught all the members of the order of the phoenix to use their Patronuses as messengers. A Patronus takes the form of an animal. The type of animal reveals something about the person - for example, Ron’s terrier points to his loyalty as a friend, and Harry’s stag to his connection with (and longing for?) his father. People do not choose the form of their Patronuses and cannot alter them at will, but, when Tonks discovers Harry outside the gates of Hogwarts and sends a Patronus which Snape intercepts, the boy discovers that a person’s Patronus form can change::
“And incidentally.” said Snape, standing back to allow Harry to pass him, “I was
interested to see your new Patronus.”
He shut the gates in her face with a loud clang and tapped the chains with his wand again,
so that they slithered, clinking, back into place.
“I think you were better off with the old one,” said Snape, the malice in his voice
unmistakable. “The new one looks weak.” (Half-Blood Prince, first American edition, p 160)
What is going on here? Harry notes shock and anger in Tonks’s face; she is clearly wounded by Snape’s comment. The reader (at least this reader!) is also shocked, and inclined to be both angry at Snape and puzzled by his cruelty to a young woman who has never done him any harm. But is he simply being cruel?
A Harry Potter fan who is also a fan of Snape and Slytherin house has analyzed every scene with Snape in it, commenting on possible motivations. (Her comments can be found at the whysnape website.) This young woman, in her analysis of the disastrous occlumency lessons in the fifth book, points out that Snape is essentially a soldier, with a soldier’s flaws and virtues. Harry does not understand this mindset at all; he is a typically rebellious modern teenager. So, when the two are working one on one, there is a serious failure to communicate. Snape expects prompt obedience; he does not typically give praise or encouragement because he considers (rightly) that he is preparing his students for battle. The children get praised only when they have exceeded his expectations, and his expectations are very high. Snape also expects Harry to be able to put his emotions aside to focus on the subject - that, after all, is the point of this tutoring. Harry, on the other hand, cannot manage to learn anything if his emotions are not engaged. Finally, Snape is harder on Harry than on almost any of the other students because he knows Harry will have to face Voldemort. In a way, then, Severus Snape’s harshness toward Harry is a sign of concern, or at least might be interpreted as such.
It’s also clear to anyone who looks objectively at his actions throughout the books that Snape is very loyal to the few people he trusts, and intensely protective. This may be most obvious in his favoritism toward Slytherin house, but he has also taken risks to protect Harry, whom he doesn’t like. Snape actually risks his life for Harry at least twice: once when he enters the shrieking shack to save Harry and his friends from Lupin and Black, and later when he goes alone into the forbidden forest in an attempt to bring Harry and Hermione back to safety. He is also the one professor we most often see patrolling the corridors at night, and the grounds when students (Ron and Harry, for example) are missing. In essence, then, whatever else he may be, Snape is a warrior/guardian.
What does this mean for the Patronus scene? First, we should realize that, though he is protective of everyone he feels obligated to guard, Snape is naturally most protective of ‘his kids’ - the students in Slytherin house. Do we know that Nymphadora Tonks, a few years ago, was not one of those students? Her mother is Andromeda Black, sister of Narcissa (Black) Malfoy and Bellatrix (Black) Lestrange. It is typical for entire families to be sorted into the same house, and professor Slughorn implies that Sirius was the only Black not in Slytherin. If Andromeda Black was in Slytherin house when Snape was a young boy, it seems likely that her daughter would have been in that same house when he was a young man. In that case, Snape was not only her teacher, but also her housemaster.
It is also possible that Severus likes and is grateful to Andromeda. We know that, at present, he despises both Sirius Black and Bellatrix Lestrange; we also know he seems to be very loyal to Lucius and Narcissa Malfoy. We don’t know how he feels about the other Black cousins - Regulus, Sirius’s younger brother, and Andromeda, the middle sister. Both of them were certainly in school with him, though not in the same year, and both of them may have been his friends. If that were true, he would feel even more obligated to protect Nymphadora Tonks, Andromeda’s only daughter.
Even if these speculations prove to be untrue, Tonks was Snape’s student and is now his colleague - a junior member of the Order of the Phoenix, to which he also belongs. And - as I said before -Snape has been protective of Harry, whom he dislikes intensely. He would not have to like Tonks in order to try to guard her from danger.
The question then becomes: If Severus Snape is actually being protective in this scene, what is he trying to protect Nymphadora from? When Harry sees the new Patronus, he simply gets an impression of a large animal with four legs, and he thinks Tonks might be mourning for her dead cousin Sirius, who could transform into a large dog. It’s a reasonable guess, but it’s wrong; in fact, Tonks’s Patronus has changed because she is in love with Remus Lupin, the werewolf. Presumably the Patronus is now either a wolf or a werewolf.
Severus Snape dislikes Remus Lupin quite as much as he does Sirius Black, and with good reason. When they were schoolboys, Sirius tricked Severus into going into the den where Lupin was about to transform, hoping to frighten him. If James Potter had not rescued him, Lupin might have killed Severus, or seriously injured him. There is no indication that either James or Remus knew about Sirius’s vicious trick beforehand, but Severus cannot believe they are innocent. Whatever his failings, he cannot accept that a person could use a friend as a murder weapon without informing that friend in advance. In his mind, Lupin is therefore as guilty as Black.
What is more, Severus is correct in inferring that Remus is weak. This is difficult to admit, because Remus Lupin is a likable and, in many ways, admirable character. Nevertheless, he is far from perfect. As a teenager, he did not intervene to rescue Severus from James’s and Sirius’s bullying, even though he was a prefect. Both Neville Longbottom, who stood up to Harry, Hermione and Ron because of their rule breaking, and Hermione, who stood up to the Weasley twins, have shown far more moral courage than we have seen from Lupin. One could argue that Remus was a boy at the time, but he showed exactly the same moral weakness as a young man in Prisoner of Azkaban when he failed to inform the headmaster that Sirius Black was an animagus, capable of transforming into a dog, who also knew every secret passage into the school. Lupin believed at the time that his former friend was a mass murderer. By neglecting to tell Dumbledore what he knew, Lupin was potentially endangering every person in the school, particularly Harry. Lupin is too eager to have people like him; he cannot tolerate censure from those he himself likes and respects, and this leads him to neglect his clear duties. This is a failing Severus Snape can neither understand nor tolerate.
If we look again at the Patronus scene with these ideas in mind, it becomes clear what Snape is trying to communicate. He is warning Tonks about Lupin, whom he considers morally weak - so much so that he might actually endanger her. No strong-willed young woman likes to have her relationships criticized, not even by close friends or family members, so it’s hardly surprising that Tonks reacts with shock and anger. I’m sure any girl would react the same way if faced with harsh criticism of the man she had fallen in love with. Snape’s manner - as is typical for him - is particularly unfortunate; he makes his malice toward Lupin quite clear while his concern for his former student is masked. As a result, Tonks is unlikely to hear the message he intends to send. Harry certainly doesn’t. All the same, the message is there. Snape is once again, as he so often does, acting as a guardian. And what is most disquieting, on reflection, is that he might well be right; Lupin, in spite of his good qualities and good intentions, might actually be a danger to Tonks. As with so many other questions Half-Blood Prince raises, we will have to wait and see.
Mary Johnson, December, 2005/Jan 2006
Note: The essays that particularly inspired me to look again at this scene were Pharnabazus’s comparison of George Weasley and George Wickham, which got me wondering who the Darcy character might be (http://www.livejournal.com/users/pharnabazus/4468.html), June Diamanti’s “Supposing the sorting Hart Wanted to Put Snape in Gryffindor?”” which analyzes this character’s exceptional courage (http://www.livejournal.com/community/hp_essays/40977.html), Lady Claudia’s analysis of Snape as a warrior in the occlumency lessons (http://whysnape.tripod.com/book5b.htm#firstlesson), and a mugglenet editorial suggesting that the potions master’s patronus might actually be a griffin - a griffin is a mythical guardian noted both for its fierceness and for its loyalty to the few who can manage to tame it. (http://www.mugglenet.com/editorials/editorials/edit-elissa.shtml)
Here is my first essay about the Potterverse. Is Snape really as cruel as he seems to be in a key scene of HBP?
In chapter eight of Half-Blood Prince - “Snape Victorious” - we witness one of what I’ve been calling Snape’s unadulterated death eater moments. These are very brief, but horrifying, moments of gratuitous cruelty to characters who are in distress, and there are only three that I can think of in the entire series: the attempt to poison Neville Longbottom’s toad during a potions class; the nasty remark about Hermione’s teeth, and the comment Snape makes about Tonks’s Patronus form. There is no excuse at all for the attacks on the two children (and Trevor the toad), but a few essays I read recently encouraged me to look again at the Patronus scene and question what Snape was really doing in this conversation.
Before citing the text, I would like to clarify exactly what a Patronus signifies in the Harry Potter books. A Patronus is a sort of spirit guardian, a form of white magic based on happy memories. It can protect against certain enemies, particularly the dementors, who suck all happiness from their victims, and Dumbledore has also taught all the members of the order of the phoenix to use their Patronuses as messengers. A Patronus takes the form of an animal. The type of animal reveals something about the person - for example, Ron’s terrier points to his loyalty as a friend, and Harry’s stag to his connection with (and longing for?) his father. People do not choose the form of their Patronuses and cannot alter them at will, but, when Tonks discovers Harry outside the gates of Hogwarts and sends a Patronus which Snape intercepts, the boy discovers that a person’s Patronus form can change::
“And incidentally.” said Snape, standing back to allow Harry to pass him, “I was
interested to see your new Patronus.”
He shut the gates in her face with a loud clang and tapped the chains with his wand again,
so that they slithered, clinking, back into place.
“I think you were better off with the old one,” said Snape, the malice in his voice
unmistakable. “The new one looks weak.” (Half-Blood Prince, first American edition, p 160)
What is going on here? Harry notes shock and anger in Tonks’s face; she is clearly wounded by Snape’s comment. The reader (at least this reader!) is also shocked, and inclined to be both angry at Snape and puzzled by his cruelty to a young woman who has never done him any harm. But is he simply being cruel?
A Harry Potter fan who is also a fan of Snape and Slytherin house has analyzed every scene with Snape in it, commenting on possible motivations. (Her comments can be found at the whysnape website.) This young woman, in her analysis of the disastrous occlumency lessons in the fifth book, points out that Snape is essentially a soldier, with a soldier’s flaws and virtues. Harry does not understand this mindset at all; he is a typically rebellious modern teenager. So, when the two are working one on one, there is a serious failure to communicate. Snape expects prompt obedience; he does not typically give praise or encouragement because he considers (rightly) that he is preparing his students for battle. The children get praised only when they have exceeded his expectations, and his expectations are very high. Snape also expects Harry to be able to put his emotions aside to focus on the subject - that, after all, is the point of this tutoring. Harry, on the other hand, cannot manage to learn anything if his emotions are not engaged. Finally, Snape is harder on Harry than on almost any of the other students because he knows Harry will have to face Voldemort. In a way, then, Severus Snape’s harshness toward Harry is a sign of concern, or at least might be interpreted as such.
It’s also clear to anyone who looks objectively at his actions throughout the books that Snape is very loyal to the few people he trusts, and intensely protective. This may be most obvious in his favoritism toward Slytherin house, but he has also taken risks to protect Harry, whom he doesn’t like. Snape actually risks his life for Harry at least twice: once when he enters the shrieking shack to save Harry and his friends from Lupin and Black, and later when he goes alone into the forbidden forest in an attempt to bring Harry and Hermione back to safety. He is also the one professor we most often see patrolling the corridors at night, and the grounds when students (Ron and Harry, for example) are missing. In essence, then, whatever else he may be, Snape is a warrior/guardian.
What does this mean for the Patronus scene? First, we should realize that, though he is protective of everyone he feels obligated to guard, Snape is naturally most protective of ‘his kids’ - the students in Slytherin house. Do we know that Nymphadora Tonks, a few years ago, was not one of those students? Her mother is Andromeda Black, sister of Narcissa (Black) Malfoy and Bellatrix (Black) Lestrange. It is typical for entire families to be sorted into the same house, and professor Slughorn implies that Sirius was the only Black not in Slytherin. If Andromeda Black was in Slytherin house when Snape was a young boy, it seems likely that her daughter would have been in that same house when he was a young man. In that case, Snape was not only her teacher, but also her housemaster.
It is also possible that Severus likes and is grateful to Andromeda. We know that, at present, he despises both Sirius Black and Bellatrix Lestrange; we also know he seems to be very loyal to Lucius and Narcissa Malfoy. We don’t know how he feels about the other Black cousins - Regulus, Sirius’s younger brother, and Andromeda, the middle sister. Both of them were certainly in school with him, though not in the same year, and both of them may have been his friends. If that were true, he would feel even more obligated to protect Nymphadora Tonks, Andromeda’s only daughter.
Even if these speculations prove to be untrue, Tonks was Snape’s student and is now his colleague - a junior member of the Order of the Phoenix, to which he also belongs. And - as I said before -Snape has been protective of Harry, whom he dislikes intensely. He would not have to like Tonks in order to try to guard her from danger.
The question then becomes: If Severus Snape is actually being protective in this scene, what is he trying to protect Nymphadora from? When Harry sees the new Patronus, he simply gets an impression of a large animal with four legs, and he thinks Tonks might be mourning for her dead cousin Sirius, who could transform into a large dog. It’s a reasonable guess, but it’s wrong; in fact, Tonks’s Patronus has changed because she is in love with Remus Lupin, the werewolf. Presumably the Patronus is now either a wolf or a werewolf.
Severus Snape dislikes Remus Lupin quite as much as he does Sirius Black, and with good reason. When they were schoolboys, Sirius tricked Severus into going into the den where Lupin was about to transform, hoping to frighten him. If James Potter had not rescued him, Lupin might have killed Severus, or seriously injured him. There is no indication that either James or Remus knew about Sirius’s vicious trick beforehand, but Severus cannot believe they are innocent. Whatever his failings, he cannot accept that a person could use a friend as a murder weapon without informing that friend in advance. In his mind, Lupin is therefore as guilty as Black.
What is more, Severus is correct in inferring that Remus is weak. This is difficult to admit, because Remus Lupin is a likable and, in many ways, admirable character. Nevertheless, he is far from perfect. As a teenager, he did not intervene to rescue Severus from James’s and Sirius’s bullying, even though he was a prefect. Both Neville Longbottom, who stood up to Harry, Hermione and Ron because of their rule breaking, and Hermione, who stood up to the Weasley twins, have shown far more moral courage than we have seen from Lupin. One could argue that Remus was a boy at the time, but he showed exactly the same moral weakness as a young man in Prisoner of Azkaban when he failed to inform the headmaster that Sirius Black was an animagus, capable of transforming into a dog, who also knew every secret passage into the school. Lupin believed at the time that his former friend was a mass murderer. By neglecting to tell Dumbledore what he knew, Lupin was potentially endangering every person in the school, particularly Harry. Lupin is too eager to have people like him; he cannot tolerate censure from those he himself likes and respects, and this leads him to neglect his clear duties. This is a failing Severus Snape can neither understand nor tolerate.
If we look again at the Patronus scene with these ideas in mind, it becomes clear what Snape is trying to communicate. He is warning Tonks about Lupin, whom he considers morally weak - so much so that he might actually endanger her. No strong-willed young woman likes to have her relationships criticized, not even by close friends or family members, so it’s hardly surprising that Tonks reacts with shock and anger. I’m sure any girl would react the same way if faced with harsh criticism of the man she had fallen in love with. Snape’s manner - as is typical for him - is particularly unfortunate; he makes his malice toward Lupin quite clear while his concern for his former student is masked. As a result, Tonks is unlikely to hear the message he intends to send. Harry certainly doesn’t. All the same, the message is there. Snape is once again, as he so often does, acting as a guardian. And what is most disquieting, on reflection, is that he might well be right; Lupin, in spite of his good qualities and good intentions, might actually be a danger to Tonks. As with so many other questions Half-Blood Prince raises, we will have to wait and see.
Mary Johnson, December, 2005/Jan 2006
Note: The essays that particularly inspired me to look again at this scene were Pharnabazus’s comparison of George Weasley and George Wickham, which got me wondering who the Darcy character might be (http://www.livejournal.com/users/pharnabazus/4468.html), June Diamanti’s “Supposing the sorting Hart Wanted to Put Snape in Gryffindor?”” which analyzes this character’s exceptional courage (http://www.livejournal.com/community/hp_essays/40977.html), Lady Claudia’s analysis of Snape as a warrior in the occlumency lessons (http://whysnape.tripod.com/book5b.htm#firstlesson), and a mugglenet editorial suggesting that the potions master’s patronus might actually be a griffin - a griffin is a mythical guardian noted both for its fierceness and for its loyalty to the few who can manage to tame it. (http://www.mugglenet.com/editorials/editorials/edit-elissa.shtml)
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Date: 2006-01-30 05:48 pm (UTC)http://professor-mum.livejournal.com/2161.html#cutid1
Snape isn't exactly the world's greatest teacher nor the most diplomatic communicator. So the snitty comment to Tonks makes better sense. He can't bear to see weakness. Love makes you weak and open. Snape doesn't accept it and LV doesn't even believe in love. Interesting contrast....
Glad you liked it, but -
Date: 2006-01-30 11:55 pm (UTC)Snape is nasty to Tonks, NOT because she is in love and love makes
you weak, but rather because she is in love with Remus Lupin, who is
himself (in Snape's opinion) weak. I don't think we can
extrapolate anything at all about Snape's views on love from this. We
don't really know, directly, what this young man thinks about anything,
but we do know that Dumbledore loved and trusted him, so we can infer
he is capable of love. If he is discounting the power of love, and thinkng it
either a weakness or too glaringly obvious to be considered - well, so is
Harry. It is Harry who, throughout this book, discounts the power of love
and forgiveness. Snape might well do the same - he and Harry, are, after
all, very alike - but we can't determine that from what we see in this scene.
Summing up - I don't believe Snape is criticising Tonks for being in love.
I think he is warning her about Remus Lupin, who is ( in Snape's not - so -
humble opinion) unworthy of her love. There is a difference.
Oh - BTW - it was this and the last book, particularly, that convinced me
Snape is a pretty darn good teacher when he cares to be. At any rate, he's very sincere is his desire that the students LEARN, and Hermione and
Ernie have no problem learning from him, and even praise his lesson. Harry
however is incapable of learning anything from Snape face - to - face, and
that is as much Harry's fault as it is Snape's. As I said before, these two are just too alike, and I don't know how they're ever going to work together, especially after the climax of HBP. But I'm convinced they MUST work together to defeat Voldemort. It'll be interesting to see how or whether they manage to reconcile. Just my two cents-
Mary
Re: Glad you liked it, but -
Date: 2006-05-24 12:44 pm (UTC)The only things Harry excells at are Quidditch and DADA. Quidditch is fun and DADA is necessary to survive Voldemort. The rest holds nada interest for Harry and he, stupid arrogant lazy boy that he is, dismisses it.
We see the WW through Harry's eyes. *Harry* thinks Snape is a rotten teacher, because Harry *wants* to see Snape as a rotten teacher.
Nobody said Snape was a *nice* teacher or indeed a *nice* person. Lupin is nice, yes, but Snape isn't. But, to speak in the immortal words of Stephen Sondheim: "nice is different from good".
Re: Glad you liked it, but -
From:BTW, sorry if I misinterpreted yours!
Date: 2006-02-01 04:28 am (UTC)We both liked your chapter walk through - my sister, on reading the bit about rune interpretations, said, "this woman is brilliant!" And I had honestly not noticed all the imagery about hands, which does seem to be deliberate. Good job!
A question; Do you think it's possible that J.K. Rowling is actually, deliberately putting in all the symbolism, imagery, etc, that we are noticing?! I mean - I know the woman is bright, but can she really be that bright? ;)
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Date: 2006-02-16 08:08 pm (UTC)I'm not sure that we can assume that Tonks was in Slytherin, though--her mother was blasted off the tapestry when she married the muggle Tonks, wasn't she? So that might be the reason she's not mentioned as also being in Gryffindor. Though that would be interesting to know--I can just imagine what it must have been like for Tonks being in Snape's house and his potions classes, given her clumsy bumbling manner. That must have driven him nuts.
I like the assessment of Snape as a warrior guardian; it explains a lot about why he continues to protect Harry and the other students, even though he doesn't like a lot of them, and downright loathes Harry.
While Lupin is my favorite adult character, I still find Snape the most interesting. He is the one whose motives and actions are the most mysterious. We see him a lot and really still know very little about him. His interactions with Harry are always so contentious that it doesn't give us the added information we get from some of the other adults who talk to Harry as a friend or son/younger brother. And we overhear Snape talking with other adults only in very official capacities, never in a social friendly relaxed manner. He is so closed off from everyone else, except apparently Dumbledore, that it is very difficult to know just what his motives are.
I do think that all the imagery and symbolism that we are seeing in the HP books has been intentionally put there by JKR. She is a brilliant writer, and there are just too many things there to have them turn out to be coincidence.
Eeyore (Pat)
Thanks-
Date: 2006-02-17 04:13 am (UTC)The one thing we do know about Slytherin is that half-bloods are accepted there. It is the house of ambition, not necessarily of pure-blood prejudice, so it isn't impossible Tonks could have been there. But of course we don't know, and may never find out.
As to Snape as warrior/guardian - glad you like it. The character just makes so much *sense* when you see him this way; instead of being a walking set of cliches, he becomes a believable human being with comprehesible motives. That's why I'm pretty much convinced this interpretation is right. But we shall see - in a year or two.
Love your icon, BTW!
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Date: 2006-02-18 09:16 pm (UTC)I think your assessment of Snape's motivations was dead-on, warrior/guardian does seem a good identification for his function in the Order, and one doesn't need to be compassionate to fill either function - rather, Snape would recognize how compassion would diminish his abilities as a protector. And while i don't entirely buy the prospect of Tonks as a Slytherin - too much of a stretch on too little information, in my mind - we do know that in order to qualify for Auror training she needed NEWT-level Potions, which means she did have the aptitude to meet Snape's high standards; therefore, it's fair to presume a certain degree of respect for her as a former pupil, regardless of House affiliation.
And of course things only get more interesting from here, because it's Lupin and Snape and all the fraught history between the two and the fact that they're both oh-so-very flawed, and while I like your read of Snape's motivation to protect Tonks from his weakness/unworthiness from Snape's point of view it somehow seems like an incomplete thought. My initial thought was that Snape may not so much be solely fixated on protecting Tonks from an unworthy lover but also from warning her against her own behaviour. This isn't necessary Snape critiquing the idea of love, but rather observing what love has made of her recently; he's an intelligent enough man to spot the drastic changes in her behaviour, seen how she's gone from being a vibrant and spirited warrior to a moping lovesick girl, and I suspect his disdain is as much for her as for Lupin. I mean this in the sense of 'You are better than this and can't let your unrequited feelings get the better of you' rather than disgust for her capacity to love in the first place.
This does invest a certain read into Snape's views on love, as already mentioned above, and I don't feel qualified to say whether Snape does or doesn't have faith in love - you have to balance his relationship with Dumbledore against such things as his personality and the rough sketch we have of his parents' marriage, the latter of which is not fully clear but does leave room to guess that Snape likely had/has doubts about the validity of love given the prospect of witnessing an abusive relationship. But for the present, it seems safe to assume, in the wake of his change in loyalties back in 1980/1, that Snape is not totally dismissive of love.
But I do suspect that his disdain for Lupin is more complicated than childhood blame. I don't deny that Lupin is weak - it's one of the things that makes me love him so much as a character - but it's also clear that Snape possesses an especially weak streak where Lupin (and Sirius) is concerned, in terms of that extra dose of hate in his down-table glare at the start of PoA, insane temper tantrums where one or the other or both are concerned... well, it's all pretty well-documented. Elements such as fear, genuine hate, outright confusion over Lupin's compulsion to be so nice to him despite it all (i've been muddling over his obsessive use of 'Severus' right up until Dumbledore's death for the last few weeks), could all be playing into his warning. I'd love to hear what you think of any or all of those possibilities, it's a really rich minefield of possibilities whenever those two are involved.
And I think i've rather rambled on waaay too much here, holidays make me lax about things like editing myself, so sorry about that. Hope it helps!
thanks for your comment!
Date: 2006-02-20 08:33 pm (UTC)As for the disdain for Lupin, and childhood blame - I think the werewolf caper actually *is* enough to explain it. As I've said elsewhere, this was an attempt at murder in which Sirius Black used Remus Lupin - knowingly or unknowingly - as the murder weapon. At least, Snape to this day sees it as attempted murder, and the one thing *everyone* has conceded is that his life was in danger. I'm not sure you can even find an equivalent situation in the real world, but, as a pretty new driver, I got into a couple of accidents. In the first one, an older lady came barrelling through a four-way-stop and hit me in the side. For a long time after that, my stomach would clench when I got to that intersection, and I still feel very slightly nervous when I go through it. That's more than ten years ago. And yet there was no setup, no former history with the other driver, no malice, and no real injury. One might argue that there was no injury from the werewolf caper, either, but I think the psychic damage to Severus was severe. And he is not a forgiving soul and cannot easily put the past behind him - a definite weakness of *his*, and one I think he's not fully aware of. I agree with Jodel from aol (at the red hen website) that, one way or another - whether as Albus Dumbledore's willing agent (her theory) or simply as a messed-up kid bent on revenge - it was the werewolf caper that sent him straight to the death eaters. And, since it's clear to both Jodel and me that Severus became Albus's agent very young, he was in a difficult and dangerous position with that crew. And it's a position Sirius Black, in particular, had nothing but scorn for. If Severus blames the marauders for his choices, this would only increase his hate for them; if, as Jodel and I think, he was aware that he was doing harder and more dangerous work than any of them, while having to suffer their censure, he would scorn them. Not a very spiritually mature attitude, but then Snape just isn't very mature. I'm rambling a bit, too, but I hope all this is clear to you?
For another look at Snape's attitude to the marauders, you might check Helen Ketcham's excellent essays on the hogwarts professor website. She points out that, as far as we know, none of the marauders have ever apologized to Severus. They may now understand they treated him cruelly, but he has never heard this from them. And this makes it impossible for him to forgive them fully, especially since by nature he finds forgiveness challenging.
So those are my thoughts on his animosity to the marauders generally. He's certainly not fully rational about them, and it is a weakness. Thanks again for your comments.
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Date: 2006-02-22 03:19 pm (UTC)Always hoping, of course, that it was Tonks, given the polyjuice theories circulating. ;D
I can see an enduring chafe in Snape's character around people who have had it "easier." And who, while considering themselves up to "fighting Voldemort," can't stand a few home truths delivered with a sharp tongue. Just think for a moment about how Mad Eye Moody would have addressed the topic. :D
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Date: 2006-03-03 12:28 am (UTC)A good point about Snape's melodrama being a defense mechanism; that really rings very true. Still, "I, the half-blood prince" made me cringe - and then I thought about it some more, and considered some of what Jodel had to say - and something clicked. Am working on a new essay, and a series of stories, that (I hope ) will express my 'grand unified Snape theory'. But it's easy enough to state in a couple of sentences:
Warrior/guardian, strongly compelled (by early life experience? His inborn nature? - he's the griffin, IMHO - or his sense of duty?) to defend those who need his help.
Abused kid? Possible, but I think Jodel is right when she suggests death eaters murdered his parents. Combined with the above compulsion, (and possibly the reactions from being abused/witnessing abuse; have you read Helen Ketchams's essay?) this completely fills in the holes and allows him to emerge as a complex and believable human being. It even explains the wacky "half-blood prince" commment. What if this is not an attempt to identify with the wizard side of the family, but rather a cry of defiance? Were there any death eaters within hearing range when he said this to Harry? Somehow I don't think so. I think the nickname may actually be a sign that he was working for vengeance on the death eaters from a very early age. But it's still melodramatic, certainly!
Swythyv, your thoughts on polyjuice are just plain scary! There are enough people running around with double agendas/double natures/ disguises without adding more! Were you the person who came up with Draco as Tonks/Draco as Madame Pince, etc?
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Date: 2006-03-04 01:02 am (UTC)Good gracious, no! Just watching them from a safe distance. As you say, there's enough to make my brains go round all ready. ;D
a sign that he was working for vengeance on the death eaters from a very early age.
I strongly concur - I think Snape was up close and personal with real life war/tragedy when the Marauders were still sniggering over Zonkos tricks in Hogwarts halls.
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Date: 2006-03-21 12:16 am (UTC)This is interesting to me for 2 reasons:
1. Harry studies hippogriffs in his 3rd year (closely related to griffins). It would give an entirely new reason for him to study those creatures in particular, and for it to be beaten into our heads.
2. Sirius gets quite chummy with the hippogriff. Snape's sworn enemy. Fascinating.
Very good essay. I had never thought of it like that.
I can actually come up with rather good reasons for Snape making fun of Hermione's teeth keeping this in mind.
Hermione is a bright girl, and Snape recognizes this. Despite her brightness, she is affected by what other people think about her (and obviously Snape is not a fan of that, based on his appearance and attitude and his feelings towards Lupin, as you mentioned). Could Snape not be telling her to stop caring what others think so much? It certainly is mean, but not too far off base.
It also makes me wonder about Neville's toad...
This is an interesting site on toad folklore:
http://www.traditionalwitchcraft.org/folklore/toad.html
A few that jumped out at me:
Romanian legend that says a man who can kill a toad can kill his mother (...poor Eileen...)
It is an omen of death (Is Neville the only one with a toad?)
It is associated with Dark Magic (Could give a good natured reason for Snape wanting to get rid of the toad for Neville, might also explain why they are out-of-fashion currently -- dark magic is feared)
Of course, his reasons for wanting to kill the toad could be entirely sinister (in which case it would mirror Heathcliff's killing of Isabella's dog... ;P).
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Date: 2006-03-22 02:50 am (UTC)I think I'm flattered that you friended me - don't know what it means, exactly, but I don't think I have any problem with it.
BTW, how would I go about getting a beta reader for a fanfic or two? I'll probably post them to this livejournal, initially. Would you be willing to read them, or would you know someone who would be? TIA!
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Date: 2006-05-17 10:29 pm (UTC)Hello Mary, I found my way here from our conversation at
Sure, he's made mistakes, mostly through wanting others to be happy/wanting others to like him. Compare that to some of his classmates - Snape (joined the racist murdering Death Eaters) Peter (ditto, plus a traitor), Sirius (an arrogant bully) and he doesn't seem so bad. Plus, I think his failings stem from his genuine empathy with others, which is a very attractive quality.
On the other hand, your take on Snape as a soldier/guardian makes me like him less. I'm not one of those people who thinks that bullying 'toughens you up'. This argument cuts no mustard with me. Studies show that kids that have been bullied are less able to cope with stress in later life compared to those that have had a happy, supportive childhood. Snape bullies because he is an immature prat who gets away with it, pure and simple. It's interesting to analyse why he does it, but I'll always despise him for it.
I liked your essay. I agree that Snape and Tonks are likely to have known each other quite well in the past - at the very least when she did her Potions NEWTs - and Snape would have known several other members of her family too. That scene where Snape insults Tonks' new Patronus has intrigued me for a while. It's described so dramatically, too, with the harsh uplighting from Snape's lantern. I've been working on several drawings of it and hope to get some decent art out of it eventually.
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Date: 2006-05-18 12:32 am (UTC)Anyway, I'm also not at all sure that we're supposed to *like* Snape. I would take Arthur or Hagrid as a babysitter over either of them - I think. But I still agree that the kiddies would be safer with Snape than with Lupin.
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Date: 2006-07-05 06:01 pm (UTC)I see no difference
Date: 2007-07-02 01:31 am (UTC)As for the Neville and Tonks statements - well, the one on Trevor is cruel and I really have to go back and look at that one again. The one with Tonks, I see your point and agree with most of it, as I think Lupin is weak and dangerous, as well. It's been hinted that Tonks isn't Tonks at all, but Lupin under polyjuice, and her patronus thus hasn't changed. Farfetched, but not impossible.
Also, JKR has stated on her website that Tonks is in Hufflepuff. One of the questions in the FAQ section. I think she put that up since Jan 07. Takes after her dad. Hard to see clumsy Tonks succeeding in potions enough to get a NEWT.
I'm just catching up to all of these essays, which is why you're getting an answer over a year later. Just three weeks, now! You might enjoy reading my first stab at an essay on my new LJ. Not nearly ready for prime time (hp_essays), and I'm working on a revision, now.
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